Pause for a second and examine your drawing. A few key features in manga girls are thus: Large foreheads, which we will cover with bangs, huge, shiny eyes and arching eyebrows, long, slender necks and gently sloping shoulders, and petite noses. Does your girl have all that? If not, that's okay- there are no right or wrong ways to draw manga, as long as it's convincing. The features I listed are tips. Now, go ahead and draw in our models' bangs and the long hair that reaches down beside the bangs. This adds appeal to the large forehead.