Edward is looking more like Edward. And if he doesn't in your picture, don't fret. Clap if your picture looks like a person because you're learning how to draw and it should be fun. Work in Edward's fine hair, strand by strand. I betcha it's soft. Feather in his eyebrows and shade in those pretty eyes. Don't worry about all those red lines. They represent shaded areas you need to focus on. Either shade in small tiny circles or light angled strokes in direction of red marks. Then blend with a stump, tissue, Q-tip... whatever you get your hands on. See the transformation!